Thursday, April 12, 2012
An Original Poem about an Eagle
Percy Bysshe Shelley
An Original Poem about an Eagle
While walking outside, I noticed a bird
A bird unlike any I'd seen before
It was a rare bird, one eagle, not four
And it cried a call so that all would stir
This eagle came flying, soft and unheard
A majestic creature, no feelings were bored
As it swooped down and a mouse was done for
And the bird flew, as if nothing occurred
Oh, how I wish to join you and fly
Fly away from my troubles and misdeeds
For if I could, never again would I
Fear the world as I have, as you would lead
And away I'd go, soaring through the sky
Never looking back, with a new found speed
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Being free like you, and as royal too
Would lay both blessing upon me
For having that freedom, now mine, could be
Disastrous on my soul, for this I knew
Long ago, power can go way askew
And change me into a beast, now set free
Hurting for pleasure, yes, only for glee
And abusing this strength, I know it's true
We humans aren't meant to be one with clouds
Nor are we able to control this gift
That you, eagle, hold above all the crowds
Of animals, who watch you as you lift
Yourself away, and fly towards the shrouds
Of night, with winds that carry you adrift
This poem reflects Shelley's fascination with the animal world. It's a complete coincidence that he happened to write "To a Skylark" which inspired mine about an eagle. Also, it follows his form of the Petrarchan Sonnet, an iambic pentameter, with an octet and a sextet, forming a rhyme scheme of ABBA ABBA CDCDCD.
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Enjoyed reading your poem. You did a good job of imitating Shelley's "To a Skylark." The eagle was a decidedly more "hardcore" subject than the skylark, however. I don't know if you intended this, but your insight that "humans are meant to be one with clouds" is very similar to the greek myth of Icarus. You did a good job of connecting the style/structure of the poem to Shelley's, but you might have also mentioned how your poem reflects certain characteristics of Romantic literature. Make sure these blogs are turned in on time!
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